Can you see the difference???

This is the part of fine tuning...where the painting is either working or it's NOT. Can you even notice what I've changed???? I pushed back the buildings and the tops of the trees and the guy's back on her right. Darkened her shadows...tried to soften the mouth on the girl sleeping in the foreground. I put translucent sparkles on her highlights and on the top of the umbrella which you wouldn't notice unless the sun hit her. I darkened under the trees.

anymore suggestions???